All Comments on 'Don't hold back'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
what makes the diference

between ord porn and this?

one line

Don't stop until the police bang down the door and stare in awe as you fuck me

a little more this, less that

didn't vote

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Well... it's dirty and kind of hot, but as a poem it lacks something... A lyrical feel perhaps.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
U meant " thick " dick not

Think dick in the last line : no one can really think with their dick ; brain gets enslaved to the erect Penis's desires , fetishes & fantasies !?!

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