What a great story - was a motion picture - those images you created in our minds (your readers) caused us to want more!
A five does not do it justice!
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Anonymous11/27/13
Great Story
Wonderful
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Anonymous03/26/15
Well gosh, this was honestly kinda sad (as in, not happy, kinda a downer, etc.)-- great storytelling, but not something I could get off to. Which is cool, hats off to you as a writer. I'm about to read part 2. We'll see if that'll surprise me, too
So alive
What a great story - was a motion picture - those images you created in our minds (your readers) caused us to want more!
A five does not do it justice!
Great Story
Wonderful
Well gosh, this was honestly kinda sad (as in, not happy, kinda a downer, etc.)-- great storytelling, but not something I could get off to. Which is cool, hats off to you as a writer. I'm about to read part 2. We'll see if that'll surprise me, too
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