All Comments on 'The Youth Pastor'

Should be a couple followup chapters this one! :-)

This was a very realistic, and very well told story. Keep up the good work. I'll gladly read anything you write. One minor criticism....water is not a natural lubricant..if anything, it washes away the natural lubricants our bodies produce. The soap, shampoo and conditioners are the only lubricants in that shower.

A very good story of how this type of relationship develops. It is not that unusual, but it could be harmful to career or worse.

By yat anther wanker

Pulling out is for tosers only which the writer is

Making a somewhat unlikely scenario seem quite plausible. While I would have preferred to skip the "anal", like life that's simply a matter of preference. As to the two "Anonymous" comments made just prior to mine I'd like to say: 1. Those who cannot SPELL should NOT be considered seriously as CRITICS! 2. Taking into consideration the best interest of others, especially an intimate partner's, NEVER makes people LOSERS (I'm assuming that is what was meant by "tosers" )! Hiding behind anonymity to make insulting remarks on an author's hard work created for your FREE entertainment though just might qualify!

I remain amongst the anonymous masses because I'm afraid to join, but we who read - For Free - can STOP doing so if we dislike a story. The common courtesy of "if you can't say something nice..." has become increasingly uncommon! The writers of the stories on this site get paid only by their readers compliments! Couldn't we use the comments section for that, or at least "Constructive Criticism", instead of name calling?! Thanks again to "areaman04" & all The Authors!

Good post. Some people feel that the anonymity of the internet gives them license to bully. And no, not everyone is entitled to their own opinion. At least they shouldn't voice it.

tosser. But who knows? toser is what an anonymous critic without spel chek is.

I loved this story. Hope there is a chapter 2 coming with their upcoming trip

A wanker is you

great story. would love to know what happens next

Nara

Sounds like a real experience written into a story. Good stuff!

O, if you only knew how much truth there is in this story. Church people really are horny as hell!

Overall, I'm fairly average looking, I suppose, but at the time, I was pretty inexperienced, sexually. There team was ahead but my car stalled at the gas station for hamburger.