All Comments on 'She's Yours To Use'

Whoa. That was hot. I was just reading it and found myself grinding my chair. GREAT job!

Lol, the ending is cute, but I suspected it :P

You're erotic writing needs work. Objectively, you need to work more on the description. Subjectively, this is isn't a good plot. It's dumb, convoluted and silly as hell.

I could agree that you're overall writing needs a little work, but damn I liked it!

;-)

My writing needs work?..really? Duhhh? laughs-its the thought that counts..

Just wow. That was damn good.

i think the idea of rape is fucked unless its purely acting i was disgusted with it but i kept reading knowing my girlfriend had sent me this saying it was to her liking and until the end i almost hated it but the ending was awesome thank you for such a good twist on it

shit

Women don't go to the barber to have their pussy shaved; they go to a salon to have it waxed.