I, however, found this a most enjoyable tale! Thank you for bringing it to us and please bring us many more such stories! Well done - five stars.
This story calls out for a second chapter. It is very well written and very erotic, nice build-up to the story.
Lots of nice triggers in this one for me... Hope there is a chapter 2 coming?
I wanted to be the babe on the bed. The "torture" was clever and new to me.
A nice story that deserves a second chapter
I found the story amazing I rated ut 5 stars. This definitely deserves a second chapter. Definitely.
You have to let us know if she gives in
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Anyone looking for Jane Austen would be disappointed!
I, however, found this a most enjoyable tale! Thank you for bringing it to us and please bring us many more such stories! Well done - five stars.
Very nice start
This story calls out for a second chapter. It is very well written and very erotic, nice build-up to the story.
Lots of nice triggers in this one for me... Hope there is a chapter 2 coming?
Another helping please
I wanted to be the babe on the bed. The "torture" was clever and new to me.
Second that
A nice story that deserves a second chapter
Second chapter?
I found the story amazing I rated ut 5 stars. This definitely deserves a second chapter. Definitely.
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You have to let us know if she gives in
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