Yes Babe, siblings should fuck and it is best with each other. This story is a good example of how much fun it is to fuck and suck your brother/sister. And you have writen a wonderful story about it. It made my fucking prick hot and hard very quickly. John p
What Hot, Hot, stories. I Wish my brothers would take care of me like that. Yummy!
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Anonymous05/25/08
WOW
Nothing quite like brothers and sisters making each other happy!
by
Anonymous06/17/08
SEXY
this story was so hot i loved it
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Anonymous11/28/08
So Hot!
This story made my pussy throb. I would love to be Alan's sister.
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Anonymous05/08/11
Hot
Wow! Loved this story! Can't wait to read more! Made me very hot.
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Anonymous05/06/14
Don't quit your day job
Horrible writing. Do adults actually talk like that?
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Anonymous05/05/15
Hmmmm
You know, its a great story. But you tell it badly. You should really be a better student of human behaviour and listen to people speak to each other. How did YOU talk to your lover the first time you were together. Forget for a moment that you are writing about siblings. And you need to be more descriptive. What does her pussy look like. Contrary to popular myth, all pussies do NOT look alike. What makes her special? Take your story and be more real and less fantasy. How do they really talk? How do they really act? Would she really half undress and masturbate in front of her brother thinking it would seduce him? A woman who had played the 'touch me' game with her brothers could easily seduce them if she had the confidence in herself. You tell the story like you want to get it over and just get to the fuck at the end.
English
Um, Um Good!
WOW! Wish I had a sister like you! *S* Loved your descriptions and language. Just as I'd like to hear it from my lover. Thanks.
very erotic
i would like to read more of your storys fining them very erotic indeed keep writing you are very good at it
SIBLINGS SHOULD FUCK
Yes Babe, siblings should fuck and it is best with each other. This story is a good example of how much fun it is to fuck and suck your brother/sister. And you have writen a wonderful story about it. It made my fucking prick hot and hard very quickly. John p
Really Hot!
I loved it. Thanks for sharing your tale.
Brother and Sisters together
What Hot, Hot, stories. I Wish my brothers would take care of me like that. Yummy!
WOW
Nothing quite like brothers and sisters making each other happy!
SEXY
this story was so hot i loved it
So Hot!
This story made my pussy throb. I would love to be Alan's sister.
Hot
Wow! Loved this story! Can't wait to read more! Made me very hot.
Don't quit your day job
Horrible writing. Do adults actually talk like that?
Hmmmm
You know, its a great story. But you tell it badly. You should really be a better student of human behaviour and listen to people speak to each other. How did YOU talk to your lover the first time you were together. Forget for a moment that you are writing about siblings. And you need to be more descriptive. What does her pussy look like. Contrary to popular myth, all pussies do NOT look alike. What makes her special? Take your story and be more real and less fantasy. How do they really talk? How do they really act? Would she really half undress and masturbate in front of her brother thinking it would seduce him? A woman who had played the 'touch me' game with her brothers could easily seduce them if she had the confidence in herself. You tell the story like you want to get it over and just get to the fuck at the end.
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