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The Sybian Introduction Ch. 02

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by amber_now2610/15/04

Absolutely loved it

Just finished reading both chapters of this story and -- after turning the fan on high -- had to tell you how much I enjoyed them. The sex was stimulating, the feelings of the characters believable and insightful (special congratulations for your depiction of the female character's feelings -- I know how difficult it is to accurately portray the opposite sex) and the attention to little details (like her nibbling on his bottom lip being a secret signal of sorts) was a delight. Thanx for a wonderful read.

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by Anonymous10/18/04

Wonderfully detailed and intense

Excellent writing, the story flows as wonderfully as Beth.

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by Anonymous02/03/05

Always Have Been Fascinated By The Sybian

Fantastic story. I loved both chapters. Have always been fascinated by the Sybian anyway. Wish my wife would try one. Great writing.

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by Michaelphyte06/12/07

Me Too ! loved these Introduction.

I have a strong Voyour streak and desire to please my lovers too; loved your focus on that, and wished I had simular relationship with my wife. Thank you for writing these chapters.

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by Anonymous03/17/09

Good Story

Good story. My only minor criticism is that Beth was his girlfriend in Chapter 1, but his wife in 2, the next day.

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by Anonymous05/03/11

i loovee thiss :)

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by Anonymous12/31/11

awesome!

One of the best. The romanticism takes it to much a higher level. Great! Please write a chapter three!

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by Anonymous02/25/12

So good!

This is fantastic!!! Please write a third chapter!!!

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by Anonymous07/26/12

Fantastic

Such an amazing and realistic story. The loss of inhibitions (even in a marriage) can be such a twisty, turning road. One of the best stories on this site.

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by Anonymous12/22/12

brilliant

Really well written, romantic yet adventurous and sexy. I love that you get both perspectives, and capture the feelings perfectly. One of the best I've read.

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by Anonymous07/16/15

So fucking hot

Wonderful my girlfriend and her b/f both completely lost control using the Symbian, the fucking that followed was mind bending. We all got totallyfucked up and blissed out, taking two days to recover. More and more of this please and soon. Fabulous writing. Cunt struck sex maniac Lanc's UK.

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