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Captive Princess Pt. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Phil_Patsfan12/16/13

Very good so far

Just a a little too short. I guess there won't be any ransom or rescue.

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by Mayness12/16/13

Would have liked a longer chapter but am very interested to see where up you take this. Pretty horrific start for the slaves so far!

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by Anonymous12/16/13

Superb story, but like the others, felt this chapter was a bit short. But if you leave the readers wanting more, you have written a good story- and you have done. Looking forward to reading more.

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Very Good!!

Great story! I'm liking the plot so far. I thought the length of the chapter was just fine! Hope to hear more from you:)

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