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Very good so far
Just a a little too short. I guess there won't be any ransom or rescue.
Would have liked a longer chapter but am very interested to see where up you take this. Pretty horrific start for the slaves so far!
Superb story, but like the others, felt this chapter was a bit short. But if you leave the readers wanting more, you have written a good story- and you have done. Looking forward to reading more.
Very Good!!
Great story! I'm liking the plot so far. I thought the length of the chapter was just fine! Hope to hear more from you:)
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