Absolutely loved your story and would love to go to a party such as you have described. Loved how the lady realised her libido through her trust in the man she loves and how they fullfilled their desires, hope to see more stories by you like this
I thought it was exhilarating..shades of parts of Eyes Wide Open. I wonder how many "clubs" like this actually exist? And how the women must feel to be used in complete anonimity. I also wonder what the husbands feel as they watch their wives being enjoyed in the same manner they are enjoying the other's wives? It never ceases to amuse me when I see people leaving shoddy comments, and them of course anonymous, not having the balls to even leave a name. Most of these people could never begin to write a short story of their own. Yet they feel themselves qualified to leave scathing comments regarding other's work. I seriously doubt that they would leave anything but these types of comments...that that is all they are here for. Keep writing, Try..I love your imagination.
DarkMoon
by
Anonymous06/03/05
Self actualization
Since most people, if they would be honest, are sexual beings, this adventure had to stir the juices. The faultless woman, free to enjoy and the lecherous spouse enjoying a beautiful scene; women fucking and sucking and enjoying all of it. Beautiful.
Thanks
by
Anonymous05/14/09
It is obvious why the women are blinded and cant
speak. It is unfortunate he chose to take her to be used without her prior consent. In reality, most women would have divorced the husband while accusing him of rape and filing rape charges on those in attendence. Every woman in the world is not a common slut for any that want to use her. Having said all that, no where are the medical issues addressed. Where is the STD, HIV/AIDS, test and who collected the certificates before hand. No condoms were used so all of it is bareback and exchange of bodily fluids. Was it assumed all the women were on birth control. Then comes the question of his wife being fucked by a black. It is one thing for a white wife to fuck another white bareback but to fuck a black bareback if she can get pregnant is a major risk and lifestyle obstacle. Her pregnancy and child birth would eventually destroy the marriage as well as both of their parents lives. The fantsy is great, the reality is totally braindead. Ah well some people are to stupid to know they just committed medical suicide.
"pervert"???? ......... You're kidding, right?... on an adult sex fantasy website??! ... Wow, did you ever take a wrong turn... Disney's a couple of page clicks back...
Imho the wife's trust in him was a tad unbelievable, after having suffered through the black man's sodomy. Apparently she did get off, however am not too sure that she would be eager for a second helping.
As one other reader had commented, all of them went bareback. What of STDs and contraception?
Now that was the most intense, hot and wild sex, I have read in a very long time, l loved reading it so much, it has given me a idea l would like to try, my fantasy is to be invited an orgy party an I would like to be blindfolded, so that l cannot see when I attend my first orgy, only hear an maybe smell it, now whether l am fully clothed or not, is for the other party goers to vote on, but must unanimous, also must vote if l am to get lucky too, but l am not allowed to move my arms and legs, they must move them for me, as if l were physically tied up, but without any bindings to tie me up, an now for one last item, l hope there will be a second chapter, an this time it's all the men folk who must wear the mask, so that the Ladies can do what their hubby's did for an to them, when they wore the mask. Rated 5 stars of hardcore orgies
Just another slut.
Why not try something original?
made in heaven
Absolutely loved your story and would love to go to a party such as you have described. Loved how the lady realised her libido through her trust in the man she loves and how they fullfilled their desires, hope to see more stories by you like this
Decadence
I thought it was exhilarating..shades of parts of Eyes Wide Open. I wonder how many "clubs" like this actually exist? And how the women must feel to be used in complete anonimity. I also wonder what the husbands feel as they watch their wives being enjoyed in the same manner they are enjoying the other's wives? It never ceases to amuse me when I see people leaving shoddy comments, and them of course anonymous, not having the balls to even leave a name. Most of these people could never begin to write a short story of their own. Yet they feel themselves qualified to leave scathing comments regarding other's work. I seriously doubt that they would leave anything but these types of comments...that that is all they are here for. Keep writing, Try..I love your imagination.
DarkMoon
Self actualization
Since most people, if they would be honest, are sexual beings, this adventure had to stir the juices. The faultless woman, free to enjoy and the lecherous spouse enjoying a beautiful scene; women fucking and sucking and enjoying all of it. Beautiful.
Thanks
It is obvious why the women are blinded and cant
speak. It is unfortunate he chose to take her to be used without her prior consent. In reality, most women would have divorced the husband while accusing him of rape and filing rape charges on those in attendence. Every woman in the world is not a common slut for any that want to use her. Having said all that, no where are the medical issues addressed. Where is the STD, HIV/AIDS, test and who collected the certificates before hand. No condoms were used so all of it is bareback and exchange of bodily fluids. Was it assumed all the women were on birth control. Then comes the question of his wife being fucked by a black. It is one thing for a white wife to fuck another white bareback but to fuck a black bareback if she can get pregnant is a major risk and lifestyle obstacle. Her pregnancy and child birth would eventually destroy the marriage as well as both of their parents lives. The fantsy is great, the reality is totally braindead. Ah well some people are to stupid to know they just committed medical suicide.
pervert
1*
Re: DWornock
"pervert"???? ......... You're kidding, right?... on an adult sex fantasy website??! ... Wow, did you ever take a wrong turn... Disney's a couple of page clicks back...
WELCOME TO CLUB ORGY
where anything goes everywhere. TK U MLJ LV NV
Another slut with an abusive husband
Nothing new or interesting in this sad tale.
I enjoyed this.
Very fun to read.
Excellent
This is interesting, sexy and well done, but the situation had a high chance of backfiring on him.
Please fix your tags they are all wrong! they need to describe something in the story so people that are interested can find it. I suggest
anonymous sex, group, cum filled, wife watching, masked etc those would at least be relevant.
Imho the wife's trust in him was a tad unbelievable, after having suffered through the black man's sodomy. Apparently she did get off, however am not too sure that she would be eager for a second helping.
As one other reader had commented, all of them went bareback. What of STDs and contraception?
OMG
Now that was the most intense, hot and wild sex, I have read in a very long time, l loved reading it so much, it has given me a idea l would like to try, my fantasy is to be invited an orgy party an I would like to be blindfolded, so that l cannot see when I attend my first orgy, only hear an maybe smell it, now whether l am fully clothed or not, is for the other party goers to vote on, but must unanimous, also must vote if l am to get lucky too, but l am not allowed to move my arms and legs, they must move them for me, as if l were physically tied up, but without any bindings to tie me up, an now for one last item, l hope there will be a second chapter, an this time it's all the men folk who must wear the mask, so that the Ladies can do what their hubby's did for an to them, when they wore the mask. Rated 5 stars of hardcore orgies
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