You've done very well with the charaterizations and the procession of the story....
Its really gr8 and i feel it has the potential to be something greater if u continue to add more! Please keep it up! ^^
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Anonymous01/11/16
Fell Off A Cliff
The climax was anticlimactic, if that makes sense. Got me hard but ended too quickly!
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Anonymous02/26/17
Part two
Can I make a part two when scott and him meet up for some more fun
English
Very nice, please give us more of these 3. Yes Jay needs to catch ten at it and join in. Talk about hot!!
Gr8!
You've done very well with the charaterizations and the procession of the story....
Its really gr8 and i feel it has the potential to be something greater if u continue to add more! Please keep it up! ^^
Fell Off A Cliff
The climax was anticlimactic, if that makes sense. Got me hard but ended too quickly!
Part two
Can I make a part two when scott and him meet up for some more fun
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