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A Subtle Attention Getter

byBrookell©
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by Anonymous

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by pi3p14i07/03/07

TO BE IN HIS SHOES

I know I was turned on by Cassie's messages... You're a great writer!

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by freemic304010/10/08

Hmmm

This story was really hot but left me hanging at the end. Wish there was another chapter!

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by Purple_Raihne06/04/09

I liked it,

Even if the pushy stranger was too aggressive

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by Anonymous06/26/10

slash cry

I was very sad the story ended when it did, however while it lasted it was very excellent :p

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by BiPhill01/17/11

I agree..it was a very lame story...should have been written differently and in more detail!!

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by Anonymous07/19/11

Dug it! Hot and well written. thanks.

Actually, an interesting approach and a well told tale. I'm typin' with one hand.

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by bigcharley4301/13/13

typing with one hand

very horny story - holding my dick in case i fall over from blood rising to my helmet - very nice form in a e-mail chat methode - keep up the writing .

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Wait, what?

Please write a Ch.02. I can just imagine him having the reactions she described, getting all into the scene and then giving up his cherry arse with ardent affection. Please do a Ch 02.

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by zeid8006/30/16

Loved it

i really loved the story,too bad you didn't continue the story.

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by xxjann10/04/16

like you were inside my head!

really great story line and writing!

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