My Son

Talk about naughty!!!!

Soooo naughty and nasty! An extremely well written story!

Shifting Point of View Spoiled This One

You keep switching between first and third person, from "me and my son fuck" to "Karen and Neal fuck"!

It spoils the mood, for me.

Shifting point of view, AGAIN!

"Play with them and suck them," I instructed me son.
NEXT PARAGRAPH
Neal dropped to his knees between his mother's legs, his eyes wide ......
Need I say more?
It seems I'm not the only person losing contact with the story by your changing point of view.
It really does bugger it up. The flow has gone.

same boring story

yeah,yeah,yeah, 10 inch cock ,mother wants it, and so they fucked, boriiiiiiiing,,,,,,

sore pussy and raw cock head

with all that fucking and sucking there had to be sore pussies and raw cock heads. They had to be skin and bones. be a little Realistic.

terrible

AGAIN YOU INSERTED A BLACK MAN INTO THE PICTURE AND RUINED THE STORY.

What is it with this interracial crap?

If you would label your shit correctly, we wouldn't have to waste time reading it.

What is it with this interracial crap?

If you would label your shit correctly, we wouldn't have to waste time reading it.

Hot!

Don't worry about the interracial thing. Not everyone is a racist. Very sexy story.

I AGREE WITH OLDWAYNE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TRYANYTHING YOU TRIED IN .YOU STARTED OUT HOT THEN YOU BLEW IT. I WANTED TO READ AN INCEST STORY. NOT A MIXED GANG BANG, EVEN IF MOTHER LOVED IT. LABEL YOUR STORIES AS SUCH CRAP......... A WASTE OF MY TIME.............LAROC OF AGES.

wasn't to bad

of a story until you brought a 'black' and a gang bang into it then you RUINED a nice little incest story between a mother and son, stupid...

Loved the story!!

I loved how mom served and pleased her son and over time became more and more submissive and served all cummers that her son brought home to use her. Moms should always please their sons. I hope this story does not end here....so many possibilities. Thank you for making me so very wet!!!

Loved the mom and son incest angle; not so much the gangbang with his friends. Still good storytelling though, thanks.

ok, but full of cliches

who talks this way??
What is the obsession with mothers with large greats?
Why do we need to know her cup size? So many stories have this detail. Not every mother is so well endowed.
Also, please pay attention to ages. You stRt the story with the mom a certain age? Keep it that way through the story.

names were changed to protect the not so innocent

Their names weren't Neal and Karen, they were Wally and June Cleaver. It happened on the night dad sent Wally up to get the Beaver.....sorry, just couldn't help myself