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by tazz31712/03/13

CONSCIENTIOUS...AS IN OBJECTOR

which is what she should have been. TK U MLJ LV NV p.s this could merit and epilog, mlj

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by FA_JF12/03/13

Well played

Sometimes karma comes around more quickly than other times.

Always a fun ride with you, Ashson.

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by DieselJester12/04/13

Needs some work

I love your stories but this one needs some work. It was confusing with the shifts from third person to first person and back again.

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