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Holiday Traditions

byDG Hear©
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by Anonymous11/28/13

Good story. And ideally, this would be the course of things. This situation arises frequently IRL. Companionship really helps the enjoyment of life, especially when most of your life is in the rear-view mirror...

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by cohibaIV11/29/13

Conflicted

Not sure what to think, and I wonder if that was your intention. It's a well-written story about an asshole who deserves to be unhappy and alone. I found myself wondering what Dorothy would see in this dick.

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by Anonymous11/29/13

Good Story

I thought it was a good story about how even after you get old you can have a second chance at love and life. Just because your spouse dies, life does carry on and no one should have to be lonely for the rest of their lives. Sure he made some mistakes as a young guy, but he spent 25 years making it up to his wife. He deserves to be forgiven and carry on.

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by Sid060411/29/13

Thank you

I enjoyed reading your story.

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by Sidney4311/29/13

Good story and very realistic, as sisters can be very close and share almost everything. After the death of a life partner, some choose to live alone, but many find a companion where sex is not the primary driving force.

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by chytown11/30/13

Thanks***

For the read.

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by betrayedbylove11/30/13

Nice

After the death of his wife he was lucky to fall for her sister even though she knew he was a cheating prick. Oh well, in fiction anything is possible.

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by Drall11/30/13

Lovely!

A fine holiday story! Thank you(as always)!

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by Jim4444412/01/13

Very good story.

And I agree, older women can be every bit as beautiful as younger ones plus they have life experience.

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by OralGoodness12/08/13

Al Man After My Own Heart...

;o) Hi DG Hear. Your story tells the truth about the essence of finding love the second time around. You can't read or fine relationships today that conveys that chivalry is not dead. Thank you for allowing me to fall in love with your male character for this short period of time.

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by Thistlethorn12/11/13

A very nice story. The cheating does complicate the character but at the same time humanizes him. I also like seeing a story with older characters.

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by BTTap12/25/13

Merry (Mary?) Christmas

A nice little story. A lot of little side-tracks; hard to cover a lifetime together in 2 Lit pages. Seemed to have elements of perhaps 4 or more common LW storylines sprinkled in here and there. You could almost do a series of several short stories with the main characters as the common element, each from a different aspect of the relationship. Just a thought. You developed just enough depth of character for each of them to hold my interest and care about them, at least a little.
I gave it a 4*.

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by phd7012/26/13

Fine tale about a marriage with ups and downs, but on net a good one.

Really enjoyed the story. Marriages have good times and challenges. But as with many long relationships, this one seemed rewarding. Husband supported his wife when illness pulled her down, and she urged her sister to connect with him, knowing he needed a strong lady companion and that she was already emotionally connected to him. Thank you, DG Hear. Dan

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by Tavadelphin04/14/14

Life is a journey after all

Lot's of things to see and be distracted by on the way - some are serious mistakes - some fun diversions - some just dumb luck -

The bastard got lucky - but paid for it before it happened.

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