Too short. I think you left them at a stage that very few could stop. Not only that, but I might miss the next chapter. I'd hate that. Good luck and keep writing.
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Anonymous12/03/13
Very nice story
Sometimes long held secret desire finally is achieved. Many mothers know of son's desire and actions but chose to ignore them. Once developed the desire can be suppressed but never goes away.
The word mum or knickers ect... should not appear in these stories because they are hideous words! Its like a dad daughter story that uses the word daddy over and over again... blah
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Anonymous12/04/13
@ Corey2Justified
The story is entitled 'Mum', a word you find ridiculous, though you obviously still read it in order to find the word 'knickers'.
I have yet to see a comment from you that is anything but derogatory, and yet I don't see any submissions under your own name other then one with a very poor rating. Maybe if you tried your hand more at writing instead of just criticizing what you don't understand everyone would be more inclined to take you seriously.
The author is a Brit, it says UK in his profile, and both words are in common and correct usage in Britain. Brits find the word 'Mom' equally silly, but are more tolerant than you.
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Anonymous12/04/13
Great.
Wow great story. It has lots of factors that I find hot, especially sniffing mummy's panties. Pity she doesn't wear stockings and heels that he could sniff and cum in!! I wonder if this story will end in a threesome with the daughter inlaw????
Can't wait for chapter two.
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Anonymous12/06/13
You left off too soon. You were right to leave Jenny out of the story for the most part and the round table discussion was right onbut you left it hanging out there where your readers can only be frustrated sexually. Like getting a half a blowjob and then being left.
English
Fantastic!
Great writing! Can't wait for part 2. Now if you'll excuse me I need to relieve the tension your story has caused!
GOOD STORY
Too short. I think you left them at a stage that very few could stop. Not only that, but I might miss the next chapter. I'd hate that. Good luck and keep writing.
Very nice story
Sometimes long held secret desire finally is achieved. Many mothers know of son's desire and actions but chose to ignore them. Once developed the desire can be suppressed but never goes away.
Fucking ridiculous!
The word mum or knickers ect... should not appear in these stories because they are hideous words! Its like a dad daughter story that uses the word daddy over and over again... blah
@ Corey2Justified
The story is entitled 'Mum', a word you find ridiculous, though you obviously still read it in order to find the word 'knickers'.
I have yet to see a comment from you that is anything but derogatory, and yet I don't see any submissions under your own name other then one with a very poor rating. Maybe if you tried your hand more at writing instead of just criticizing what you don't understand everyone would be more inclined to take you seriously.
The author is a Brit, it says UK in his profile, and both words are in common and correct usage in Britain. Brits find the word 'Mom' equally silly, but are more tolerant than you.
Great.
Wow great story. It has lots of factors that I find hot, especially sniffing mummy's panties. Pity she doesn't wear stockings and heels that he could sniff and cum in!! I wonder if this story will end in a threesome with the daughter inlaw????
Can't wait for chapter two.
You left off too soon. You were right to leave Jenny out of the story for the most part and the round table discussion was right onbut you left it hanging out there where your readers can only be frustrated sexually. Like getting a half a blowjob and then being left.
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