I wished that I had found this story when it was finished because it is one of those rare stories that once you start you don't want it to finish, the waiting is pretty painful at time but if the story keeps going the way it is at present I will be there at the end. THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY SO FAR.
Peter.
sounds like his boss sold him out
Still a great story...
Keep them coming. This is great but only 2 pages? Now I have to wait again.
Of course I enjoyed reading the story.
MORE!!
The chapters are really not long enough!
I just want to keep reading.
Loving the story, it is fantastic
Love it
A fantastic tale that just keeps getting better and better
Great Story
I wished that I had found this story when it was finished because it is one of those rare stories that once you start you don't want it to finish, the waiting is pretty painful at time but if the story keeps going the way it is at present I will be there at the end. THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY SO FAR.
Peter.
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