Gimme some of that! mmHMMMMMM!!!!! DAYUM I need my man right now! this is the best thing I coulda read this early in the am! 5* hun and keep em cummin! ;3
My wife read this one earlier and pretty much raped me... but then again, you can't rape the willing. :D
5 HUGE Stars!
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Anonymous12/04/13
Very good story
Many friends develop feelings but are afraid to act on them. It often takes a rejection or break up to bring the friends together. It is better to take a chance than regret it.
You've got two sexy people here --Blake and Skylar -- exploring each other for the first time. If Blake is this muscular and manly football player, make him a bit more mature and give him some chest hair on that great chest. Skylar can trace her fingers through a good dusting of chest hair across those manly pecs.
I really enjoyed the story! It was fun and didnt drag out too long before getting to the exciting bits, but.... This thing needs a serious editing!! I gave it four stars, it would have gotten five except there were so many damned words left out of sentences or word screwups that it distracted and detracted from the story! Honestly I see so many stories on here that could be great if the authors just hadn't been lazy and had spent a few minutes reading what they had written!
...anyway, like I said,I enjoyed it so keep writing, but put the constructive criticism to good use and improve your work! :)
English
so what happened to them? married with kids or one fuck and done?
Chapter 2 & more??
Please don't stop the story line here, you have a great thing started!!
Excellent writing!!
THANKS
Great story, sure hope you add more.
Daaaayyyyyuuuuummmmmm!!!!!!
Gimme some of that! mmHMMMMMM!!!!! DAYUM I need my man right now! this is the best thing I coulda read this early in the am! 5* hun and keep em cummin! ;3
*****
Five.
Short but very very hot
Thank you!
My wife read this one earlier and pretty much raped me... but then again, you can't rape the willing. :D
5 HUGE Stars!
Very good story
Many friends develop feelings but are afraid to act on them. It often takes a rejection or break up to bring the friends together. It is better to take a chance than regret it.
Very good.
Wish it was longer.
great story. you should really get an editor though. 4 stars!
Good story
Please tell me that there will be more?
WOW
Wow, well that escalated quickly......
Good start
You've got two sexy people here --Blake and Skylar -- exploring each other for the first time. If Blake is this muscular and manly football player, make him a bit more mature and give him some chest hair on that great chest. Skylar can trace her fingers through a good dusting of chest hair across those manly pecs.
Good story but...
I really enjoyed the story! It was fun and didnt drag out too long before getting to the exciting bits, but.... This thing needs a serious editing!! I gave it four stars, it would have gotten five except there were so many damned words left out of sentences or word screwups that it distracted and detracted from the story! Honestly I see so many stories on here that could be great if the authors just hadn't been lazy and had spent a few minutes reading what they had written!
...anyway, like I said,I enjoyed it so keep writing, but put the constructive criticism to good use and improve your work! :)
Five Stars!
I loved it...short and sweet!
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