From the way that it read, it states in paragraph 13 that, " When my husband would beat me I could feel your anger and it grew especially when he'd let his son have
his way with me." So she's a bad mother in leaving her son even though its hinted that he raped her?
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Anonymous12/04/13
Son
From my reading, it was her husband's son not hers. So it would be her stepson.
While I appreciate the feed back and letting me know of your confusion (which I will be careful with in the next story) Her son was rapping her and was supposed to be like the step-son and Vincent killed them both I will be sure to double check my pages next time thank you for your feed back :)
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Good start
I hope there is another chapter.
Nice beginning
Hoping for more. 5 stars ~K.
It beautiful!
5 Stars! Nice story! Some more!
what about her son?
So she just left her baby? What a terrible mother
to anon
From the way that it read, it states in paragraph 13 that, " When my husband would beat me I could feel your anger and it grew especially when he'd let his son have
his way with me." So she's a bad mother in leaving her son even though its hinted that he raped her?
Son
From my reading, it was her husband's son not hers. So it would be her stepson.
nice start
I want to see more
Making This Clear-Good Mother
While I appreciate the feed back and letting me know of your confusion (which I will be careful with in the next story) Her son was rapping her and was supposed to be like the step-son and Vincent killed them both I will be sure to double check my pages next time thank you for your feed back :)
I really liked this a lot... Continue please
...erm?
Needs some serious backstory work. Very Lacking atm.
3/5
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