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What a crystal!!!!
Loved the beginning of the story... Can't wait to see the rest... Imagine what two crystals can do?!?!?!?! Thanks.
From fantastic beginnings... Well, I can't wait to see what comes next!
that was wonderful...
thats not a good story for a first story. Its a good story all around! I really enjoyed it
So sexy, so exciting.
Loved it, please give us another chapter. It sure has me hot for more.
Crystal Connection
And a connection it made....a first timer here maybe, but not as a writer....you are very descriptive, which is a must in a story. You leave your reader wanting more which is also important....Now you will have admirers and fans alike waiting for your next submission...Thank You Hon,
You made this lady a bit damp.
Promising, but...
This is promising, but it needs editing. Writing in first person is fine, but it would work better in past tense than present. I look forward to seeing more chapters of this story, though. I'd love to know where the author is going with it.
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