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Ravishing the Young Princess

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/06/13

I enjoyed this story, and hope there might be another chapter.

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by Anonymous12/06/13

me, too

Great job! I would love to read another chapter.

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by Anonymous12/07/13

great story

awesome. I hope there are a chapter or two or left in this story. Maybe involving some other farmers or their daughters...

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by Anonymous12/07/13

servant using her?

Sounds more like she's translating her father for her benefit lol. Nice story tho!

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by crusherblue12/10/13

Great!

Great choice of narrative voice.

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by crusherblue12/10/13

More.

Please continue with additional chapters...........

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by longknob07/09/14

More...

Wow! What an erotic story. Pls write a few more chapters

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by sassysasha8912/28/14

More

Please write a few more chapters.

So much potential of what could happen here. Maybe you could have Madeleine ride his cock in her ass and Ella soon commits incest with her father.

Either way, I hope for another chapter of this story.

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by Anonymous06/17/15

Excellent story line.

Please add more. Your writing is superior. He took her anal virginity and she had his cock in her mouth. He needs to introduce her to the joy of having her ass cheeks spread wide and him thoroughly licking and sucking her asshole while tongue fucking her tight tasty anus until she comes.

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by blackknight31402/13/17

Veeerrry nice.

I thought that this story was great. The story line was totally believable, and the sex was good. In other words, "It had a great beat, and would be easy to dance to." (If you get that reference you are old!)
Good job.

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