A Slave's Revenge

Love it! Can't wait for more!

Very interesting. Wanna read more! Wish it were longer

Kind of delusional. In an uprising of this sort, everyone related to the ruling class is going straight to the guillotine or whatever it is they're using, and they're not going to conveniently "forget" the president's daughter. She and anyone trying to shield her would go down. Dude's kind of a complete dumbfuck. He has to know better.

It's also a rather depressing story; she's not a straightforward oppressor. Apparently this woman has not only been repeatedly pimped out and raped by her father's friends, but been made even lower by servicing their "slaves" sluts, which suggests to me this dude's whining is kind of misplaced when his status in society has been on almost equal footing with this woman. Middle-weight score.

more required

This story has a lot of loose ends and many places to go so a few more episodes in it at least. Keep going I will pass full judgement of my view when you have finished the story or is this one for finish the damn story, if so be kind enough to let them know it needs ending if you have no intention of doing so, that would be a shame as it looks like you have the ability.

Confused

If he is lower because he is male, then how does the father get to use her for business?

pretty good start...

I'm really liking where this going. It seemed kind of like a tease for a big story

Well that was bad

Not nearly enough information in this short story. Which led to far too many questions. And when you didn't have an ending the whole thing went up in a pile of smoke. A "1'.

French Revolution ?

So this is like France in 1792 ?

potential

liked where this was going then it just came 2 an end, when it was getting good, must try harder!