very creative indeed ... expand on this microverse of yours.
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Anonymous12/12/13
Very good
...but why "femdom" tag? Are leeches female?) Anyway, I liked story a lot. Hope to see more from this author (and maybe sequel about personal experience of some not-so-lucki adventurer ;-) )
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Anonymous12/17/13
Stunning
Thanks for that work of art!
A really unusual style and very arousing.
Please go on with an adventurer investigating the species.
Awesome!
Positive genious - beautifully written and so so agonizing.
Wish I could give it a ten
One of the best stories I've ever seen on his website.
This writer must post more of his work---and soon.
good read
I love how you manage to maintain the didactic tone throughout, and yet make this sexy. Very creative and well-written!
hmmmm
very creative indeed ... expand on this microverse of yours.
Very good
...but why "femdom" tag? Are leeches female?) Anyway, I liked story a lot. Hope to see more from this author (and maybe sequel about personal experience of some not-so-lucki adventurer ;-) )
Stunning
Thanks for that work of art!
A really unusual style and very arousing.
Please go on with an adventurer investigating the species.
Good sport, but...
why is there no animal relief in attendance for the fairer sex...? True, they did not bathe in public in those days...
Loved it. More please!!!
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