Excellent! Just the right amount of buildup, the people seem real, and the action is believable, and you wrap the story up very nicely. The only thing I spotted is you used mom's when I think you meant moms.
Thank you for an enjoyable read..
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Anonymous12/06/13
In fact I was surprised at the total lack of awkwardness between us, as if incest between mother and son was the most natural thing in the world.
Well, Davie, that's 'cause it is the most natural thing in the world. A boy and his mother are always aware that he came out of that wonderful hole between her legs, his mother's mommy-hole. That that's the cunt he lived in for nine months and the cunt he was born from, it's his own damn birth canal. Now David's sporting a big hard cock between his own legs, so nothing's more natural than that the boy should revisit his mother's baby-hole, snuggling his big cock up into the cunt that's peculiarly his. Mom wants her big strong David up where his "hard virile prick" belongs just as much as he does. To both of them his hard prick feels so comfy and cozy--so natural--jammed up his mother's cunt, surrounded by layers of warn wet loving mommy-twat, mom and David know that his prick is back up its natural home, his own mother's twat. Of course the boy fucks the shit out of his mother, giving her the best fuck of her life. Mom cums like crazy, her best cum is when David unloads his hot young balls and shoots a huge geyser of his warm creamy semen up inside his mom. It won't be the last time.
Perhaps you missed this sentence?
"Just as I was certain that she had dressed the way she had so that when the moment she hoped for came, there would be no clumsy fumbling with underwear."
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Good Story Not too long and believeable
LOVED IT
Excellent! Just the right amount of buildup, the people seem real, and the action is believable, and you wrap the story up very nicely. The only thing I spotted is you used mom's when I think you meant moms.
Thank you for an enjoyable read..
In fact I was surprised at the total lack of awkwardness between us, as if incest between mother and son was the most natural thing in the world.
Well, Davie, that's 'cause it is the most natural thing in the world. A boy and his mother are always aware that he came out of that wonderful hole between her legs, his mother's mommy-hole. That that's the cunt he lived in for nine months and the cunt he was born from, it's his own damn birth canal. Now David's sporting a big hard cock between his own legs, so nothing's more natural than that the boy should revisit his mother's baby-hole, snuggling his big cock up into the cunt that's peculiarly his. Mom wants her big strong David up where his "hard virile prick" belongs just as much as he does. To both of them his hard prick feels so comfy and cozy--so natural--jammed up his mother's cunt, surrounded by layers of warn wet loving mommy-twat, mom and David know that his prick is back up its natural home, his own mother's twat. Of course the boy fucks the shit out of his mother, giving her the best fuck of her life. Mom cums like crazy, her best cum is when David unloads his hot young balls and shoots a huge geyser of his warm creamy semen up inside his mom. It won't be the last time.
Panties...
Cam he see through them? I didnt see where he took them off. And how about descriptions
To Corey2
Perhaps you missed this sentence?
"Just as I was certain that she had dressed the way she had so that when the moment she hoped for came, there would be no clumsy fumbling with underwear."
Obviously because she wasn't wearing any.
Descriptions of what?
Fun read!
Nicely done with a plausible scenario!
Nice
Hope this story continues, he gets his Mom pregnant, and her pregnancy causes her breasts to swell....!
good story
hot sex, nice people, well written thanks
Thanks for your good work.
GREAT
Tender, honest, sincere, a young man
learns about life as he fancies his mum and
they begin to really love each other.
A GREAT story! Thanks.
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