All Comments on 'Daddy Can't Resist'

No, I didn't.

Thank you for that time together baby.

I think you found it hard resisting Daddy as much as he couldn't resist you.

Great story though, please keep them cunning.

Chapter 2 is pending approval, hope you all enjoy!!

Also Daddy Can't resist maybe removed at a later date and worked into a short novel of adventures!

Great first story and looking forward to more

http://www.literotica.com/s/daddy-cant-resist-ch-02

For a story which created little opportunity to identify with the characters it certainly had a strong erotic charge, I'm interested in reading chapter 2.

Amazing.. can't wait to read the next chapter..

How often I've wished my dad secretly enters my room, thinking I'm asleep, and has his way with me. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.

Either written by a virgin, or a man. Probably both.

You have one hand on your tiny cock while you type the story with your free hand. You can't think as you hunt and peck letters trying to convey the vision in your lust clouded mind. You spurt all over the keyboard and you clean it up. You think the story is just great and you submit it. You know you'll do this again and again until you run out of hand lotion. Or you will do it until your mother catches on and grounds you for months.

At this point, it probably doesn't matter to most people on this site, but 'you're' = you are ... not 'your'. Otherwise, this story was much better written than most. Few authors use words like 'euphoric', but it's appreciated by those of us who've gone through a lot of these stories looking for something a bit more literate. Thanks.

That being said, I'll repeat what others have mentioned. Second-person narratives are simply not a good idea. There's a reason that the majority are first or third person.