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only in a sick dream. Your story should be just a little real to get a good comment
It had nothing I look for in a story plausible plot, relatable characters, or any real reason to care what happened- but hey, spontaneous incest with a wet-dream red-headed stacked aunt who happens to be a cop? Fetish rocket fuel, sir! 4.5*
A read that I have read before on this site at least twenty time. Thanks for sharing. If you do a part two put a little feeling into it.
I had to mark it. Unfortunately no zero available. Lacking in in even a basic seductive intro. Don't give up your day job because you can't write
Almost no character development, no real build up, no real plot.... Keep your day job.
I've had more satisfying sneezes that last longer than this 'story'...
It's short. What can you say for it? Answer; NOTHING A bid fat woopy. A sleeper but it's already DEAD. Redo this Stinker.
Don't listen to these other people. I really liked it. I got hard reading it.
I enjoyed this nice short story because sometimes the long story's get old and this was a nice change
you three super critics need to shit in one hand and barf in the other. it was good!!!
It was good i thoght it could have been longer, with a little bit of dominance on the aunt's behalf
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get real
only in a sick dream. Your story should be just a little real to get a good comment
I love a good fantasy!
It had nothing I look for in a story plausible plot, relatable characters, or any real reason to care what happened- but hey, spontaneous incest with a wet-dream red-headed stacked aunt who happens to be a cop? Fetish rocket fuel, sir! 4.5*
Its***
A read that I have read before on this site at least twenty time. Thanks for sharing. If you do a part two put a little feeling into it.
awful
I had to mark it. Unfortunately no zero available. Lacking in in even a basic seductive intro. Don't give up your day job because you can't write
Sad
Almost no character development, no real build up, no real plot.... Keep your day job.
Really??
I've had more satisfying sneezes that last longer than this 'story'...
Zero stars is to much
It's short. What can you say for it? Answer; NOTHING A bid fat woopy. A sleeper but it's already DEAD. Redo this Stinker.
Great Story
Don't listen to these other people. I really liked it. I got hard reading it.
I loved it
I enjoyed this nice short story because sometimes the long story's get old and this was a nice change
Zero! you're really sad
you three super critics need to shit in one hand and barf in the other. it was good!!!
good one
It was good i thoght it could have been longer, with a little bit of
dominance on the aunt's behalf
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