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A good story so far
I've enjoyed reading the 1st chapter and look forward to the rest of the story.
It's the Hermit so it can't be bad.
Good start I wish it was longer but I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Thanks
Aaaaaaaaaaand?
Hurry and finish the story, please.
WOW THE MILITARY FINALLY CAUGHT UP
with Back to the Future and their flux capacitor. TK U MLJ LV NV
Great story
About the point of realism, considering an "realistic" alternative timeline starting at 1586 one cannot say who is King in another country in 1606, too many diversions from the original timeline have taken place at this time. The whole point of the discussion is moot. The same goes for many other "facts". The story in itself is realistic enough and beautifully written and therefore needs no further nitpicking
MfG GeneralMagnum
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