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When I Stop Laughing*****
I will thank you for a great read to me. And thanks for sharing.
Cute little story
I guess you're more interested writing stories atm, rather than watch The Ashes ;)
Btw, gave it a 5*. I like your stories.
Greetings from Oz
Different...
Gave you five stars for this one. I like your stories. Keep writing.
ONCE AGAIN TRANSLATION AND COMMUNICATION
two downfalls in a good marriage. TK U MLJ LV NV
One Problem
When he comes to his senses boy is he gonna be pissed about the dent.
Only kidding.
Great tale.
Thank you
I enjoyed reading your story.
Great story
Made me laugh and worth five stars. Just one question. Are you sure she dented the car? After all you gave her the idea, maybe you had caught her out playing around! You did just leave the niggling doubt.
Maybe you could turn this on its head with a follow up
Wound me up like a discount wristwatch !
You're a bad, bad man . Thank you.
You Bugger you...
...loved it.....LOL
Nice one.
Oh what a mess we can get into when we think too much, and talk to little. 4*
Enjoyed it
Good, as far as it presents itself. However, the ending doesn't make a lot of sense. Was she paying the guy with sex? Why was she parking her car and going to his apartment several times?
Yes, 99% of the time a woman lies about meeting a man, it's to get her CAR fixed! )))))
Ha ha! Very cute! Aren't you the clever one!!
Not so much.
Let's think one more minute, shall we.....?.
Just a couple of lies to her husband, so NO MORE TRUST, but FOR YOU, no problem, right?
I once had a girlfriend who said she told me the truth 99% of the time.
I said great, but RIGHT NOW, am I hearing the 99% or the 1%???
And THAT is the problem, clever boy!!
So the NEXT TIME she's late and there is NO DENT, then what?? )))))))
And just one more little thought....
how was she going to PAY for it, since he'd find out if she took money from their account?? Maybe on her back? I mean, what's ONE MORE lie, yes? ))))
So when YOUR wife lies to you......
Just tell yourself that your wife is simply getting her car fixed!!!! )))))))))))
Just remember to skip the ORAL SEX!!!
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A wife arrives home one day and says
Darling I have some good news and some bad news which do you wish first. The husband immediately asks for the good news first. " well honey the airbags in the Jag work perfectly......." Oh yeah 5 + 1 stars! Always top notch writing ! Thanks
Still leaves you wondering Ummm!!
I enjoyed the premise of the story but ...
How was the payment made?
Wouldn't the husband notice the money missing from the bank account?
Why was she meeting this guy at his house instead of his work place where he fixes cars?
Liked the story 5*
But it is another case of a wild bull running head on without looking around first. He really has no idea what is going on! Get your ducks in a row before opening your mouth! I agree with the idea that once you know she lies you might as well turn her in for a new model without dents....
Fooey. No excuses!
Divorce her anyway, get it over with... come on, you know you want to!
Divorce - the sacrament that WORKS!
great
love your stuff, plus the happy endings, call me a sentimental fool
LOL!!!
I LOVE A HAPPY ENDING!!!
I knew it had to be something, but...
didn't guess the car getting scratched. Cute little story, probably a 4 but I gave it a 5 anyway. Any story that isn't a willing cuckold story these days gets an extra star from me.
Answers to a couple of you disbelievers
1 The car was dented, because I say it was.
2 he said "let's pay the man!"
3 I made a point of saying her car was parked outside some commercial premises!
Thank god most of you have a sense of humor. Still, if it gives some of you pleasure to always see the bad side, then pleased to have been of service.
Damn! LOL
I sort of figured it was something to do with that car, but that was priceless! Thanks for the chuckles. :D
5 Stars.
Oh my God! A 5* story in Loving Wives about
a real, genuine loving wife!
Nice one!
Lying to the husband.
She lied to her husband. Not a good marriage.
So Much Fun!
A really fine story for the Holliday season. Thank you!
Well, Kinda...
BritEZ
Parking in front of a body-shop was never said! A 'commercial establishment' was ONLY said during the 5:30 'assignation!'
However, warning the reader that NO sex was to be had, pulled a lot of the lion's teeth! Combine that with a deliberately ambiguous overheard telephone conversation and the rest of the kitten's teeth were pulled!
4* nonetheless. Thanks!
Not a pun . . .
. . . but almost as satisfying. I love a good pun any day and twice on Sunday. Always enjoy your delightful sense of humour as well Brit. {just forced to use the across the ocean spelling on that humor}
Thanks for a fun quick interlude.
Okay.....you got me !!!
Thanks. Quite wonderful. You taught me a lesson which I certainly deserved. :-)
A secret she had to keep
She could never admit that she dented a new car!
Good!
B,
Good job--again.
Matt
Funny
But didn't she realize how angry he was? BEFORE she explained? She didn't realize he felt that he had caught her cheating? Not too clever that one. You sure you haven't been at the schnapps again?
Good story,
There have been story books written about people who cannot lie. We all do, and we all ignore or forgive harmless lies. Husband is irrational about damage to the car, the wife very reasonably ducked the issue, because it is no big deal. Speaking personally my wife and I have separate checking accounts since our marriage was six months old. each has access to the passwords. She or I could pull a fair amount of money out and the other would not notice.
If you set a high enough bar, nobody will clear it. If you want perfection, don't marry, you have enough to keep yourself busy .
Oh well, it was a nice upbeat story, as advertised
Chilley
more proof the british men are the stupidest men in the world
awful and predictable
Vampires will swill garlic smoothies wholesale ...
before Harry " gets " satire in story or writes one.
Oh Harry
What are we going to do with you? I'm sure you're quite a sweet old man really, but I guess all those years working as a PI (Yes really- he was), has soured this aspect of your character. Never mind. If my writing continues to keep you amused, then I'll keep on trying.
And he bought that story?
She's caught flat out about to get a little strange rough, as we say, and he's so relieved by the first credible story she cooks up that he accepts it, that it's all about a dent in a fender? Doesn't even ask each separately "which fender" to see if they can agree? Unfaithful wives everywhere can learn from her!
(more seriously, you overplayed his suspicion and then indignation and underplayed his denial, heartache, all the rest of what you understand so well, so by the end your narrator was a caricature worthy of being duped -- which is no doubt why the above occurred to me as equally credible, as alas it is)
Great Little Story
Thanks!
There you go again...
making me feel good. This was a double feel good. An honest mistake that was corrected before the husband made an utter fool of himself, and H.I.V. didn't like it.
Or it didn't end so well
Good cover story, but...no proof
Oh what a tangled web we weave
etc. etc. Wife too stupid to function or too duplicitous to live. Hard to guess which one.
I understand Ginny
She knows she would have been dressed down if she had let Ken handle it so she was taking the path of least resistance. I blame Ken for creating an environment where she feared telling him some little trivial mistake and having to take a clandestine approach to getting a car ding fixed. As to the paranoids. We are told she has never given him any hints that there was a problem in their relationship until the day of the mishap...
And another thing
Why do some people feel they have to assassinate the author's character if they write something that doesn't get their approval or get their winkie hard. How much did they pay to read the story? Maybe they should just ask for their money back (heh heh) and move on to something else that won't raise their cockles.
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