My Journey From Virgin to Cuckold

Why is this posted in loving wives? The narrator sounds like he is in middle school or maybe not even that old. I'm not sure what this was but it seemed way too immature for an erotic site.

Not another wimpy cuck story. Where are all you sicko's coming from?

to all you cucks out there who like this kind of shit

do the human race a favour and kill yourselves

?????

Where the hell are you going with this story? Bad intro. Should have gone a lot further. So far all we have is a hairless teenage boy running naked through back yards. Sounds like the beginning of a pedophile story. And aliens? Really? REALLY???

First if all: wrong category.

Second of all: wrong category. Third: wrong fucking category.

Gave this a 1*

Is anybody else beginning to wonder just what is going on in Lit? All we seem to be getting now is this cuck garbage, where are all the good LW authors? Please, please come and liberate us from this cesspool of cuck.

Intriguing

After all those hostile comments by our good reader Anonymous, so far this isn't a bad story. It is intriguing and I look forward to seeing where it's going. And it is well written too.
Two crits which the writer may ignore. Firstly It might have please the Anonymous Literotica readers more if he'd started further on in the story and done the sci-fi bit as a flash back. Secondly why not finish the whole darn story and then post it? I don't like serials. I don't always catch the subsequent episodes.

Too all you anons.

Fuck off! you don't like the story, don't read it. I see a lot of potential. Maybe no "Loveing wives" stuff, but this story could go anywhere from here. We already got reference to aliens. Stuff happened last night. Could have been a dream. Soooo, lets let the kid do his thing.

Think about it, nobody gets into the nitty of a story on page one. So why should reverdemoi?

I like it!

Reads well. Lots of options. Mystery, tension... Keep going!

Good story

Can't Waite to see more from you on this topic hope you post it soon

The comment of Dirtyoman?

Now THAT is what makes reading the comments worthwhile - hysterically funny comments like his. "If you don't like it, don't read it"? And exactly how do we know that we don't like it if we don't read it? I figure he was drunk when he wrote the comment. The story itself. I give it a maybe. And I'll wait for the next part before voting.

1*

To all you whiners, go fuck yourselves. 1* for this trash.

Based on the authors newest story...

I'm thinking this one was mislabeled as loving wives and cuckold. Especially since the description of the other one is going from virgin to cuckold.

As for the story, it was meh. Definitely needed to be longer or include some more backstory. Decent start, but needs work.