A Daddy's Love

Well Done

Fine tale, easy 5*

very nice

thank you for this piece. The father's letter was
a gem!

Choices & Consequences

Nice story. It's good to read a story where a person almost makes a mistake, instead of plunging into it head on and then seeing the train wreck after. Strangely, it seems to me, that the infrequency of stories like this mirrors the infrequency of this kind of insight in real life. Most of the time people seem to willfully plunge into bad choices and then scramble to avoid the consequences of those choices. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent!!

Thanks for sharing.

Well, there's a turn I didn't expect!

But right up my alley anyway!

I really like the story. It's sweet and poignant. I felt guilty right along with her as she read the letter. I especially like that she pulled back just before making that huge mistake.

Great story!

silly

You don't write a story just a load of emotional nonsense. Not a patch on your normal writing.

Father's letter

As another comment mentioned, the father's letter was exceptional. Not sure that amount of prescience exists, but then, I don't have a daughter. Very nice story, even without the Xmas angle. Absolutely deserved a 5.

Damn

What a great story, thank you for writing and sharing it with us.

No wonder

Anonymous, you are an idiot. I like a BTB story as well or more than most. However, a true loving story like this tops everything. Find someone else to trash with your spite!

Wonderful story.....

Heartwarming emotional story. Hit home on so many levels for me. The nights he spent sleeping in a rocking chair holding his baby daughter reminded me of my husband and our daughter. The dinner preparation scene for Christmas had me crying so hard the words became a blur. It was so poignant and true to life. It was very similar to my first holidays after my mom died.

Frilly, Cheesey Sentiments & then a Fleeting Glimpse of Honed, Edged Steel, then Back to the Mush Embued with Whole New Meaning

How do you beat that combination? Dunno. *****

AWESOME!!!!

Nobody's perfect, but damned if you didn't come close. I loved this. Five full stars. I'd have given it ten if it was possible.

As a father and husband...this story touched me..

There are no limits to what a father will do for his family. Great story.

Well written and very heartfelt.

Very impressed!

This site is called "Literotica"

It's not the "Hallmark Channel."

LSD hits a triple...maybe an in-park homer

Very poignant. My wife was too good as Mommy for me to be that much a Daddy but I've seen those fathers who had to and DID! Kudos! TxTT had to have some of that to be able to write it! Kudos to him for that and for this tear-jerker!

Double for LSD's longest title (1 bagger) that summarizes the story beautifully (gets him to second) then the comment is much shorter than the comment title (3rd and maybe an error lets LSD dash and slide into home plate!

The story (and comment title) reminded me of a picante pulled pork BBQ sandwich on King's Hawaiian Bread. Super sweet on both sides plus a tangy savory innerds!

5* and Fav x 2

Another Classic

Another great story from you. Thanks and especially in this special season with so much evil in the outside world. But, even so, part of me would like to have known a little of what she did and how it happened. Did Michael ever make her disclose everything?

I loved it!

Sniff, sniff, Im glad it's not a work day. TY for writing

Sweet tale

Very nice story, liked Dale a whole lot. One thing that disconnected a bit for me was that the impression I had earlier in the story was that the wife was going to call it quits on the marriage, but her later internal monologue suggested that she was not intending on leaving her husband and only wanted a little fling. Which was it? Gave it 5 stars.

Wonderful!

It was like you had been to our family holiday gatherings and took notes. And I know all about that father-daughter relationship. I could never be more proud of mine.

This story is a winner, hands down!

one fine tale

that was one fine tale. Dale did what a father is supposed to do. You love them and teach them about life. sometimes the hardest thing to do is let them fail so they can learn. Not fail horribly just enough to learn. sometimes you make them very mad at you when you say NO, but later they will tell you thanks. Dale was a FATHER. love and protect the family that is what fathers are supposed to do. too bad I can't vote twice, 5 stars many times

the best

I like what you write, but I think this is the best story you've written so far.

Going to be hard to top this in the future

First time I have ever commented

Wish there were more than 5 stars available, A rare three generation story. Answering some of the questions about why would have been redundant and added nothing

Excellent! 5*s

Thanks

If we are forced to endure 100 cuckold stories to read a story like this, please write 1000 cuckold stories.

Thank You

I have expended all my expletives on your past stories. The only thing left is for you to let your fans know when the novel (future best seller) is to be released. Again, thank you loved the story.

A father's love?

A father's love or desire to control ever aspect of his child's life?
An interesting tale of a family, as one of the other commentor's suggested it was a little "hallmark". I guess it's just my twisted nature but the constant monitoring of the father I found creepy. At some stage you have to step back and let them find their own path.

THANK YOU!!!!

For this wonderful story and giving your great characters the proper ending!!!!!!!!!!!

I guess you can finish a well told tale properly!!!

Great job!!!

good story

You can always be counted on to write a really great story. thank you

great xmas story

TTT, I really enjoyed reading this. And I have been through similar experiences as the people I have cared about have passed away. We try to adjust, some of succeed and the rest of us endure.

As for the grumblers, my suspicion is they were expecting an Incest story and were disappointed that it turned out to be an almost vanilla Romance. Well. with some hot fudge topping.

Five stars for sure

I wonder what grandpa did to the wanna be perp. Great story. I liked the little twist at the end. Well done!

NO YOU DON'T

"A father's love or desire to control ever aspect of his child's life?
An interesting tale of a family, as one of the other commentor's suggested it was a little "hallmark". I guess it's just my twisted nature but the constant monitoring of the father I found creepy. At some stage you have to step back and let them find their own path."

As a responsible parent you are always there for your kids, no matter how old they are. Even if that means tuning in and teaching some DIRT BAG some manners. YOU DON'T FUCK ANOTHER MAN'S WIFE. Plain and simple.

I wish I could give you higher than 5*. This is the best story this year in this category.

GOOD JOB!!!

The protectiveness is nice, endearing even. The psychotic level of stalking his daughter's *adult* life is creepy beyond plain old disturbing. Three stars, losing one for super creep daddy who has apparently deprived his family of his presence just so he could go psycho on a wannabe seducer, and the other for making physical discipline any part of marriage. Spanking her for lying? Really? There's sexual adventure, and then there's that line that shouldn't be crossed.

Personally, I'm kinda curious as to what the "other" issues were. Vanilla sex is a weak "issue", and it's not like a magic dick full of variety and adventure is going to cure real issues in a marriage.

Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

2* it was just BORING.

Enjoyed it

But then I enjoy pretty much all your stories. If I had to nit pick, I felt that the first letter ran a bit long.

Thank you

I enjoyed reading your story.

Awesome!

Wonderful. Just wish that most would learn from this. A close family and really good meaning people. The divorce rate would drop substantially. However today most would never follow the right path. This country has become a selfish, satisfy me now, culture with too much self pity. I wish there were more "Dad's" out there. Great work. Keep them coming

Loved it

A truly wonderful tale

Great story

However I fell it got lost in translation about mid way

Enjoyable story

Nothing excessive or cruel, she just came to her senses when pushed. How did her father find out what she intended to do? How did the husband not know? Did the husband know and get her father to help him bring her back? Will we ever know?

Perfection in Pose!

Great story and even better writing!! Thank you for sharing

WTG! 5 Stars

Glad to see you are finally trying to grow a pair.
Keep up the good work!

Just to say I've read this

I have too personal thoughts about Jessica's attitude being bored with her life, things that I will keep to myself.
If I gave voice to what I'm thinking, I would come off as preachy.
That said, I do prefer your lighter stories, this one hit too many raw nerves with me.
Just my own issues really.

Good story with a couple big flaws

You had me, all the way up until "if you do this, you're no longer my daughter." WTF? What kind of father's love is that? I love you as long as you are faithful to your husband? That and the violence. It's ok to hurt people for your daughter but it's not ok for her to cheat. What kind of moral code is that?

How timely!

What a truly excellent piece of writing. Well constructed - held the interest throughout - twist in the tail and timed perfectly for the Festive season. How refreshing to have a strong inventive story line instead of the usual crude, monotonously samey, banging offerings from the great unwashed. I will certainly look out for further offerings from this skilled writer.
Seasons Greetings to all

Buenos Aires is in Brazil

where they speak Portuguese.

User110

You are thinking Brazil. BA is in Argentina, where they speak Spanish.

Enjoyed it

Thanks for the offering.

To Zed0

"finally trying to grow a pair."

You obviously haven't read much of TTT's other stuff

Try "Gamer Goddess", or his alternate ending to "The Joke"



To TTT

I've said it before and I'll say it again. If you ever start writing professionally, I'll buy your stuff sight unseen

And I agree that "That Old House" would make a pretty fair movie, in the right hands