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A Christmas Gift for Cole Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/12/13

I enjoyed the story and look forward to the next chapter. I will also see what my wife thinks of it.

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by AndreaDayle12/14/13

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Fantastic! I love this and find it hard to believe it's your first erotic writing. My favourite part was the shower scene, particularly how Leah could see Nora's face in her fantasy - very hot!! I also liked the characterisation of the husband and the way he lusted after Nora. It's nicely setup for whatever comes next because both husband and wife clearly have desires for the friend. Great job and keep writing.
Andrea
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