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by Oldbear6312/09/13

I liked it

But dislike words like cuz. Like words like shant. A generational thing, I guess

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by DanielaRo12/09/13

@Oldbear63 I share your opinion on cuz :) changed them already but will have to edit the poem. I used words like as when or just removed the cuz..

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by Scotsman6912/09/13

Just

beautiful.

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