That was very sexy, and rather moving. I like how real his reaction was to realizing what she was -- all nervous and perturbed. And I like that you made her a hermaphrodite -- most people wouldn't have.
I really hope you continue this story. I would totally read a series of this. Please, though, extend your sex scenes a bit more! This one is hot, but very short.
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This looks too be the beginning of a long and good series
good story
I enjoyed the read. Only wish you had put a little more into it.
Don't stop writting. Gave it a 5.
is this a repost?
Great story, but is this a repost? I am almost sure I have read this story before on Literotica.
There are a few stories with the name Fallen Angel but they are different to mine
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That was very sexy, and rather moving. I like how real his reaction was to realizing what she was -- all nervous and perturbed. And I like that you made her a hermaphrodite -- most people wouldn't have.
I really hope you continue this story. I would totally read a series of this. Please, though, extend your sex scenes a bit more! This one is hot, but very short.
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