Key Chain Party

Seriously in need of an editor

your good ideas sabotaged by bad spelling and grammar. Please seek editing help on this website.

Good start

Good start to a story but it seemed rushed - you need to build up to it, just like building up to a good orgasm. Take more time in development and I think it will pay off for you.

3/5

Loved it!

Can't wait to read part two. Please continue the story and more detail.

Oh my. I was invited to a party by an employee who was 58,Betty I was 35. All the guys were in their 50s/60s, The ladies the same. It turned out to be a key party, a large bowl, with 6 keys. Betty told me what was about to happen,she said I could leave if i wanted, she said if she didn't get Joe, she hoped it would be me.I stayed. Betty didn't get Joe or me. I had pick number 4, I got Anna, a lady in her mid 60s, plumpish, medium height, nicely dressed, skirt, nylons. She came over, what happens now, she smiled, we can do nothing, stay here, or we can go to your house or mine. She said I live not too far away. I said well, you got me, your choice, she said lets go to my place and see what happens. We drove, 10 minutes, I must admit, my cock was semi hard.. Once we went inside she said to me, look I know I am a lot older and I understand, I put my arm around her, my hand under her skirt, between her pantyhosed legs, stroking between her very warm legs. Now , no more talk as I lost my clothes, my cock sticking straight out. She looked, can I, I held her, lets just do what we feel, no means no, so lets go. She grabbed my cock, pulling me into her bedroom, sat down and pulled me to her, my cock sliding into her mouth, fuck she was good, I told her better stop or I will cumm. She held my legs, pulling them forward, I placed my hands lightly on her head, I felt my cumm rising and empty into her mouth, she kept sucking, so good. I pulled back, she smiled, I pushed her back, pulling off her skirt as she got rid of her blouse, I ripped the hose, no panties, this woman knew,, I looked up, take off the bra, my breasts sag a bit, take it off, she unhooked it, I grabbed her breasts in my hands, slapping them a bit, pinching her nipples, moving my face between her legs, licking up slowly, her pussy wet, open, her clit standing out,i flicked my tongue over it, bit it, sucked it then still pinching her nipples slid up, my cock still hard, I reached down, at the entrance to her pussy, she was trying to push up. I reached and pinned her arms above her head, I pushed brutally forward my cock entering her in one thrust and held it there as she moved around it, oh fuck me, just fuck me and I did savagely her legs around me, her first orgasm, quick, long as I kept thrusting into her. She went limp, I didn't care I savaged her, she kept having small orgasms, quick ones until I felt my cumm rising for a second time, flowing into her pussy. I rolled off,she was gasping for breath.I was done. I left the next morning but not before she sucked me and insisted I fucked her doggy style, she liked it hard and fast, her pussy splashing juice onto my legs as I emptied inside her again.