Sis, Maria, and Me

so 1 woman just up and moves out of the country,then another marries him then moves out after having 2 kids without getting a divorce? FUCK THAT

not bad but not good

you have too many characters involved, it would be too easy for one of them to get mad or hurt and blow the whistle on the rest. you need to remember two things when writing,
1) when it comes to incest it is ALWAYS the fewer the better and keep the outsiders out of it.
2) always remember the old saying "KISS - KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID".

Too Much

There is not a "nudist colony", there are nudist resorts.

Too may people. There would be more jealousy in a group like that. Sounds like fun, but needs a little more reality.

AAAH!!

Kind of weird, and very unlikely, but "Wouldn't It Be Loverly"?

Stupid

theif

Fantasy...not reality

I have been a fan of this site and this section for a long time. I find it interesting at how many people want realistic stories, not just a fantasy they can imagine to get off, but a real story they can get into and identify with the characters.
I didn't mind the many woman, what guy would mind that fantasy? It was the mundane descriptions of sex that bothered me, no detail, nothing for the reader to really draw a picture from.

I don't know what the fuss is about

I just found it sad that Maria left.