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Neighborhood Dad Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by yesterdays12/14/13

enjoying this story

5 stars. Looking forward to the next chapters.

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by bigbob240612/14/13

Neighbourhood Dad.

Damn thats hot! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous12/14/13

More!

I liked both stories in this series...and I want some physicality!

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by Anonymous12/14/13

Monkey's

Kind of like the "No More Monkey's Bouncing on the Bed" series.

Excellent so far !!

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by Anonymous12/14/13

Cannot wait for more

Very enjoyable and leaves me wanting more. PLEASE do not become an author who drops a story for a long period of time or completely. Your style of writing is very enjoyable, believable and enticing. More please.

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by woody123012/14/13

nice build up. awaiting chapter 3.

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by litereader5412/14/13

Great 2nd

Keep the story going! Very good writing. Slow build.

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by ammoman12/15/13

Well written, and ...

Interesting tale. It keeps one interested in all events without being about base sexuality. The mind of the father is very well represented. He cares, is interested; but, also fears being too obvious. He walks that narrow path of interested, but fears he will over step his self-imposed boudaries. I look forward to continuing chapters. Thank you.

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by Anonymous12/15/13

It's nice to read a *story* now and then.

Please keep going. I suspect I know where this is going, but not 100% sure and that's a good thing. I want to enjoy the ride.

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by CallMeABrit12/16/13

nice start

building slowly, and leaving us guessing exactly how this will pan out. Encore!

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by daireto12/17/13

MORE!!!

This is really good

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by ramonbrook01/08/14

Very nice build up of the

Characters and the sexual tension! I hope you plan on writing many chapters of this story. Because I don't want to stop reading!

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by rightbank06/09/14

interesting so far

but it seems to be dribbling out a little bit at a time.

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Mind that Matters

A MIND IS A TERRIBLE THING TO WASTE, and HIS IS WORKING OVERTIME!

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by Anonymous07/18/14

Love it!

Great writing! I love the slow build up. I also like a sense of humour, I've been chuckling out loud while I've been reading.

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ONE STep

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