A Rose

This is lovely!

The level of detail really makes the poem, and the ending is powerful. I especially liked these lines:

Little fragments of beauty
Destroyed and broken
Left to gather dust

Just beautiful.

nice

Very deep...and truly lovely!

really lovely, and bitter

and so it is finely balanced,

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love and time

A precis on the ravages of time, and how love flees.

absolute shite

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Moving

Sadly demonstrates how the most beautiful and joyful things can't always be preserved, and that often, they fade away and lose their vitality.

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To avoid feeling pain
Avoid feeling love
In fact feel nothing at all


That's the life of the living dead.

fallen

A life time of dreams ~ abandoned like the petals from a faded rose ~ living only now in memory's garden.

If this is your heart I hope to see some joy soon

A broken heart can make for wonderful prose but I hope to hear some joy from you soon.

POETRY CAN BE SARCASM

or used as a put down. but should try to be positive. tk u mlj lv nv

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