All Comments on 'The Twelve Days Of Litmas'

by qhml1

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CleardaynowCleardaynowover 10 years ago
Nice one

Very nice structure - the variations on the 'and a' combined with each particular day's offering lift the poem and make it both very good and very funny. 5*

superquad1968superquad1968over 10 years ago
Nice One Q!

I think you hit all the categories here at Lit with a particular shout out to LW.

Merry Christmas to you and your naughty elves.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
very nice

glad only twelve days

nice modulation and end

5

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
This was fun and funny

I liked the variations on your wife...Maybe you can pass on some of those STD's to her for Christmas...

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
funny as hell

made me smile

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
OK , i loved this song/poem

i cannot believe this only has 735 views as of this date.

(cough , blush) well maybe i can,,,,

i have read every story by the Author , and yet i never looked at the poetry before ... (shame on me)

this had me laughing and smiling & it's really very funny , idk how original it is ,

i for one have never seen anything similar before .. so i give a big salut to the Author.

has to be some way to get this poem/song more widely viewed & talked about.

those members rating this 5 stars ... please go one step further & add the song/poem to your Favorites ..

Twelve Days Of Litmas , will not fail to cheer up anyone who reads it..

xxxhugsxxx

tazz317tazz317almost 9 years ago
ANY PERSON CAN TAKE A STORY ALREADY TOLD

transpose and juxtapose and put it into fold. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
TAZZ

Git a TAZER and shoot your self. But firzt tell me what the FUC all those letters mean.

10 not for TAZZ though.

bill...

CrkcpprCrkcpprabout 7 years ago
Bahahaha !

I did a spit take right on my monitor screen ! That 'Lil Ditty is gonna be stuck in my head for a long time !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
13 makes for a dime a dozen, **************.

I had never read any poems by any authors, but now I will try your other three. This one is outstanding. I am still chuckling.

JimDiamondJimDiamondover 1 year ago

Not all that poetic, BUT it was creative and funny... :-) So a five

RGRollRGRollabout 1 year ago

Oh My, My. Words fail me.

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