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Nice one
Very nice structure - the variations on the 'and a' combined with each particular day's offering lift the poem and make it both very good and very funny. 5*
Nice One Q!
I think you hit all the categories here at Lit with a particular shout out to LW.
Merry Christmas to you and your naughty elves.
very nice
glad only twelve days
nice modulation and end
5
This was fun and funny
I liked the variations on your wife...Maybe you can pass on some of those STD's to her for Christmas...
funny as hell
made me smile
OK , i loved this song/poem
i cannot believe this only has 735 views as of this date.
(cough , blush) well maybe i can,,,,
i have read every story by the Author , and yet i never looked at the poetry before ... (shame on me)
this had me laughing and smiling & it's really very funny , idk how original it is ,
i for one have never seen anything similar before .. so i give a big salut to the Author.
has to be some way to get this poem/song more widely viewed & talked about.
those members rating this 5 stars ... please go one step further & add the song/poem to your Favorites ..
Twelve Days Of Litmas , will not fail to cheer up anyone who reads it..
xxxhugsxxx
ANY PERSON CAN TAKE A STORY ALREADY TOLD
transpose and juxtapose and put it into fold. TK U MLJ LV NV
TAZZ
Git a TAZER and shoot your self. But firzt tell me what the FUC all those letters mean.
10 not for TAZZ though.
bill...
Bahahaha !
I did a spit take right on my monitor screen ! That 'Lil Ditty is gonna be stuck in my head for a long time !
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