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Love it
Great little humorous interlude on a rainy Sunday afternoon.
That was funny as hell
I loved it!
Once again a well done story from what looks to be a promising author. Story was quick and witty, it felt like a full read not just jumbled together time line or a stuttering retell of events. Flow of the story also seemed right, could probably have been a little longer and descriptive, but a fun quick little read on a sunday with a lot of white shit on the ground.
5/5 looking forward to next in your series
nice
Very nice indeed. Light and humorous. Thank you.
This is good
The most unlikely people sometimes get together, and it can be good, balancing each other out. This compelling story reaches into a human heart and turns it on, even though it may not turn on the human body as much.
Very entertaining
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.
WTF?
What is it with small women? WHY do you writers place your characters under five foot four? It's such an emotional turn off for me as a reader.
light hearted, humorous.. FUN
Your stories seem to be pure romance with the sex thrown in just as an afterthought. Not that I'm complaining.
After reading a few of those damsel in distress and knights in shining armor type stories in this category, this was a refreshingly different piece.
5stars, please continue being this awesome.
fun
fun fun fun...thanks
gawd that was funny!
Thank you, Author, for this very funny bit.
Laughter is still the best remedy.
Loved it...
Further adventures would be great, love and laughter go perfect together.
To Anonymous Turned Off By Short Women...
If it's any solace, you're cancelled out by those of us who consider it to be hot.
:-)
Nice story, great humor and wonderful characters. Well, Kitty is for sure.
couldn't
read in its' entirety. so 1*
Great Story Line
Very enjoyable content & characters to read about, I had some confusion when you changed between the 2 characters but I caught on during the second read through and found it much more fun. You have attractive writing skills and with continued work plus a good editor you'll become a favorite. BRAVO!
Fun
Now that was a cute fun story....Thanks
Lol
Loved that ending
hehehe
a very good one... Funny and lovely :)
GOOD
FUNNY GAVE ME A LIFT AND IT GAVE HIM WELL YOU KNOW VISITS TO E R PLUS LOTZLOVING
RON
wonderful!
Sorta close to home!
Was involved with a young dancer of much the same manner! Spent much time at the hospital with her! Her injuries, not mine!
Thanks for the story, it was fun, as was my time with her!
fun story!
I enjoyed it! Please continue to write!
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