Chuck Ch. 02

Chuck better be thankful there were no other kids that popped up or got any STDs since he loved having unprotected sex. I can't believe he didn't use any condoms when he was in the porn/whore business. It was funny to me he decided to use a condom the one time he had sex when him and Sammy got back together.

Now, that was a clean but sexy story my man. True love and good lust has no race attach to it! The ending was appropriate because the couples involve were truly in love, educated, and had something in common (`love, a future legitimated business, good family structure, and good love making). Great tools to start a good healthy marriage and life together.

Good story DG

I have often read your stories in Loving Wives. This one would fit there as well. I like the absolute honesty with which you have treated not only the instant couple but both sets of parents. It all fits well for a good story.

Good job.

FAKE! FAKE!

DUH! Everybody knows that Negro's have bigger penis's than white people, unless your Polish or Scandinavian that is.
Negro's NEVER go down on women, it goes against their ethnicity, just like they can't help being attracted to blonds.
It's like part of their DNA or something.
Other than the above mentioned glaring errors, it was a very enjoyable story.

What About Dan

I don't blame Dan for being a little miffed. His wife giving birth to a bi-racial baby has got to be most irritating.
If he'd had any balls he would have just divorced her stupid ass immediately!
In fact had you written this story from his point of view, it would be "burn the bitch" time.
In fact I think Sammy should have gotten some "comeuppance" for being an ignorant slut, and YES! Fucking two guys who don't know about each other definitely qualifies her as an ignorant slut, no matter how well intentioned.

Fine Story

I all ready commented that I did not like the ease with which Sammy lied. At the time of the makeup sex I also thought the condom strange but she certainly did not want another baby at the time. But the built a future and a foundation for a loving family and that is good enough for me!

3 stars

but just roughly, 2,5 would have been ok.

the writing is good as usual but every story under interracial is crap , is a racist shit. like this one as well. just page 3 tells it all.

you either love or you don't even if she is green. so all characters an unlovable, considering they are adults, eventhough they behave like kids under the age of 4

WTF

DG has hit rock bottom. Use to be able to count on him

nope

She is a slut no matter how its put and a senator running for office would be crucified in the polls especially by others running against him in not racist but literotica stories start making u that way, was john holmes.or ron jeremyblack black? Get my drift someone should write story where black deal drugs and make women crack whores and rob and kill cause that is more truthful

Specific data must make sense

I've read several of your stories and I usually like them a lot. My criticism is not on the central theme of your story but on the data you included on the gym Chuck was going to buy. You said the gym grossed $15000 a month and netted $10000, then said he had five employees paid $500 per week each. That comes to over $10000 a month before employee benefits and employer taxes. On top of that you've got utilities(which would be high for a gym), equipment maintenance, cleaning, etc. Finally, there's also rent unless Ralph owns the building. I know this is not really central to your story but you would have been better off to just say it netted $10000 a month.

About some names...

I the first chapter, Samantha's fiancés name was Edward. In the second chapter she married Dan. Huh?

Did I miss something?

Sorry

This was pretty bad. It was clearly written by someone who has no idea how a Black man thinks of himself. He would never say "I'm a black man, but I'm a proud black man.", as if to say there is something inferior about being black. That's white people lingo for "one of the good black people." And who the hell would have sex with swingers from the internet without a condom?!

gone to hell in a hand basket

is this ur auto-bio.
how pathetic can a wanna be civilized human get
1 star