Skin Ch. 04

You make these....

These installments are way too short. Try making them a little longer. You get my attention and just as you do, you end the story.

I really wish there was more!

I really want these to be longer, but I know you're just trying to keep your followers happy with these quick chapters. Thanks for the update, I absolutely loved it!

bitches like her always need a smack in the mouth.

more?

I can't wait for more in this series. Such good build up so far.

Take a little more time and make these updates longer, 3-6 pages for each update of this entertaining story at a time would be great.

Does anyone ever finish a story?

Typical. Pretty good story and then it just stops.

Good

Will there be more?

please update to new chappy

loved this story so far from a sci-fi fanatic from the 60's
also it be cool to see the once snobby cheerleader (possibly) drooling over Toby...lol

Good Story

Hope to see more of this, great writing and good story. Maybe bring back aliens or have him getting into all sorts of trouble now that hes a new man :)