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by Anonymous

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by Angeline12/14/13

Lyrical

and really lovely, those moments of dropping off when sleep wins out.

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by tazz31712/14/13

CLEAR YOUR MIND

take deep breaths or visit John Barley Corn, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Ashesh912/15/13

Sleep clamours in the tunnels of your mind , Butters

While your poetry roars thru' the highways of our minds !!

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by twelveoone12/17/13

suggest

align the animals buzzing...dogs
considers flapping bats hung upside down
5ed

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