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A Rogue's Folly

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by Hethen12912/30/13

Good try

Think there are some good ideas but you need a editor. Felt like I was reading something from Google translate.

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by Anonymous01/13/14

Terrible grammar

Story was ok. You didn't say what race she was. I get a feeling that you were focusing too hard on cumming to bother editing. Pick a tense and stick to it. Some is written in present tense and others in past.

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by Anonymous04/19/14

Great!

One of the best stories I read here :-)
Comments are too harsh, maybe. I don't agree with them. It's definetly not something from Google Translate and had really nice details. I really liked it, keep it up! :-)

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