Stockholm Syndrome

Good but only because how disturbing it is.

She is fucked up and perhaps he will feel some guilt at his actions. Not likely, though, he'll just pump her and then dump her because no matter what? She's used goods and is better off with a bullet in the head than this twisted soul she's become.

I'll do it myself.

Too easy

He should have tied her to the bed and tortured her. He should humiliate her, fuck her face, slap her breasts, anything he can think of that will inflict pain on her. But don't touch her cunt-- make her beg for it. Then he should charge her dad for the treatment :p

Very nice

This was so very good. Loved it.

Loved it!

That was really good! Props ;)

Love love love!

I love how it turned out. That kinky kind of attraction is the best, especially when there's a rough but gentle type. :)

Beautifully Done!

Great story. Superbly written. Too bad the site limits me to five stars.

Love your work

Your characters have enormous depth & warmth, in fact they seem tangible & real. Your writing is of a quality not often found on this site. You could give E.L.James a run for her money. I enjoy your writing much more than hers, I think you are a better writer. Thank you for creating sexy, intelligent stories that are gripping & fascinating. Please keep them coming.

twisted and lovely

This was a gem; I liked it a lot. You have an authentic voice as a writer.

Can you PLEASE write a sequel to this? You should just write a book on it!