I never read the first story but if ths is longer why didn't you finish it? It just sounds stupid without an ending or at least adding more to it, like going into the house and him fucking her tits giving her some fresh cum on her face.
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Anonymous01/26/14
interested
I've never read the original story, but I hope you decide to keep expanding on it.
other version ...... skimmed over extremely quickly .............. no matter
what people actually say - this version millions times better than other version
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Anonymous01/27/14
Still Too Short
Still to short, for the next load of acne remedy could have been sucked out.
Maybe she had to make daddy ready to shoot by putting it in her pussy.
Giving her injections of it 2 or 3 times a day.
The new cure for acne.
English
bring on the next part, its nice
lengthened by
The story was made longer by adding all the "word -- word," and use of "..." not by actual story. Try again as this version is junk.
anonymous
loved it bring on more
Longer?
I never read the first story but if ths is longer why didn't you finish it? It just sounds stupid without an ending or at least adding more to it, like going into the house and him fucking her tits giving her some fresh cum on her face.
interested
I've never read the original story, but I hope you decide to keep expanding on it.
just searched:
other version ...... skimmed over extremely quickly .............. no matter
what people actually say - this version millions times better than other version
Still Too Short
Still to short, for the next load of acne remedy could have been sucked out.
Maybe she had to make daddy ready to shoot by putting it in her pussy.
Giving her injections of it 2 or 3 times a day.
The new cure for acne.
Too short...
Would have preferred a longer story; think it could be develed further still. Please do.
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