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by Anonymous

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by todski2812/15/13

So ,uch happening sonically, metaphorically, imagery, this is outstanding. your word play is exceptional!!

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by Ashesh912/15/13

Marbled whip , Geometry of love , howling for a distant moon !!!

Immortal phrases , Butters ! High5- ed .

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by Ashesh912/15/13

Also the phonetic punnin' on " thinkin' aloud " 'n

Thinkin' allowed : missed this trick on first readin ' : thank U , Tod to bring this gem to our notice !!

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by butters12/16/13

yeah, punny stuff, Ash. ty!

thanks everyone - wasn't sure 'marbled whip' with its two images would work or clash. ty

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