Hot and well written.
Once this story is done I would love it if you wrote a second version with him hating every minute of it. I know you have written him here as a natural submissive, but it would be interesting to see a viewpoint from a non sub doing the task for two months. It would piss me off no end.
I predicted the end by hinting with my first comment.
Bit sad really that the marriage is destroyed, but hey ho.
Great writing.
I would love still to see a story with him fighting it
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Wow
Hot and well written.
Once this story is done I would love it if you wrote a second version with him hating every minute of it. I know you have written him here as a natural submissive, but it would be interesting to see a viewpoint from a non sub doing the task for two months. It would piss me off no end.
Steamy stuff!
Just the thing for a cold dark night just before Christmas! This was a terrific story - thank you. Five stars.
"Sometimes I hate my editor Barb. She is very good at what she does,"
She isn't. Not only should you get another editor, but you need a proofreader as well.
Well
I predicted the end by hinting with my first comment.
Bit sad really that the marriage is destroyed, but hey ho.
Great writing.
I would love still to see a story with him fighting it
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