All Comments on 'Ruthie's Story'

Hot and well written.

Once this story is done I would love it if you wrote a second version with him hating every minute of it. I know you have written him here as a natural submissive, but it would be interesting to see a viewpoint from a non sub doing the task for two months. It would piss me off no end.

Just the thing for a cold dark night just before Christmas! This was a terrific story - thank you. Five stars.

She isn't. Not only should you get another editor, but you need a proofreader as well.

I predicted the end by hinting with my first comment.

Bit sad really that the marriage is destroyed, but hey ho.

Great writing.

I would love still to see a story with him fighting it

Terrific! A few grammatical errors, but didn't detract from the story line. On to part 2.