Any story that can make Anonymous cry as badly as he is crying in these comments in a good story to me! Good job, author! Unlike Anonymous, you actually know what "loving wife" means. Anonymous is too fucking stupid to understand a concept like antiphrasis.
The premise starts with a guy allowing an old buddy to stay at his house. After finding out that the old buddy used to threaten him, I don't believe he would have ever invited him to stay. I read the whole story but you really lost me early. 2*
You scream like a menopausl bitch about anonymous comments but you say absolutely nothing about the story itself. Commenting on the comments you fucktard? Jesus lady get a life. Just because your last
story got a blazing 2.00 you don't have to lose it with everyone. At least the anons are giving their opinion on the story not what the other anons are saying.A far as this story goes I voted 3 The writing was pretty good the but content is tired. Been done to often in the past Have a nice day
because the term suck pussy is bull shite. You lick it , play with it, finger it. And a sex story where a guy brings home a bully and knows the dude is going to fuck his wife is crap. You must hate oral sex sugar..As a woman I sure as fuck ain't going to play with someone that don't lick the clit.
No lesson just a fact. Why not comment on the story? Did you read it. By your statements nobody would ever know? Why the hatred? They are entitled to their opinion just as much as you are. Guess what little? Are we not all really anonymous here? Im sure your name is not little as mine is not Zed. Right?As for writing a story you are correct I have never posted something here and Im sure to be bashed for someting you have written is not easy.The problem with your theory is that unless you post a story you should not have an opinion? Really? I don't think that's the way the people who run this show think. Do you? Lastly, I actually think you have talent as a writer. I hate the content but the writing itself is good. Your story flows well and is easy to read regardless of whether I like cuckold stories or not. Relax little lifes to short.
But there were simply too many incongruence's to make it work. The way this is written there shouldn't even have been a visit, let alone a bone-stupid wife gullible enough to fall for his ploy.
He couldn't get it up again because he had cum 3 days in a row? Really. I'm well over 40 and I can get it up twice in a row after doing it three days in a row. Now finding a partner to do that with is a different story, hehehe.
Poor old Billie would know it wasn't his baby, but kept it to himself. The next summer they visited Frank with their three month old baby, and Kathy came home pregnant again.
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Anonymous05/30/14
What a slut after his comments and her putting billy down !
He should have thrown them both put the door.
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Anonymous01/29/15
Absolutely NO intelligent thought put into the plot.
If you're a lay author, then why would any readers care to read your postings?
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Anonymous03/02/15
well you would know about blow up dolls dear annony
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Good job of making Anonymous cry
Any story that can make Anonymous cry as badly as he is crying in these comments in a good story to me! Good job, author! Unlike Anonymous, you actually know what "loving wife" means. Anonymous is too fucking stupid to understand a concept like antiphrasis.
Not Likely!!
The premise starts with a guy allowing an old buddy to stay at his house. After finding out that the old buddy used to threaten him, I don't believe he would have ever invited him to stay. I read the whole story but you really lost me early. 2*
Hey littlecordelera!
You scream like a menopausl bitch about anonymous comments but you say absolutely nothing about the story itself. Commenting on the comments you fucktard? Jesus lady get a life. Just because your last
story got a blazing 2.00 you don't have to lose it with everyone. At least the anons are giving their opinion on the story not what the other anons are saying.A far as this story goes I voted 3 The writing was pretty good the but content is tired. Been done to often in the past Have a nice day
Amen Zed56!
Pretty low life story.
You truly suck
because the term suck pussy is bull shite. You lick it , play with it, finger it. And a sex story where a guy brings home a bully and knows the dude is going to fuck his wife is crap. You must hate oral sex sugar..As a woman I sure as fuck ain't going to play with someone that don't lick the clit.
some wife. some friend.
kill them both.
Hey liitle
No lesson just a fact. Why not comment on the story? Did you read it. By your statements nobody would ever know? Why the hatred? They are entitled to their opinion just as much as you are. Guess what little? Are we not all really anonymous here? Im sure your name is not little as mine is not Zed. Right?As for writing a story you are correct I have never posted something here and Im sure to be bashed for someting you have written is not easy.The problem with your theory is that unless you post a story you should not have an opinion? Really? I don't think that's the way the people who run this show think. Do you? Lastly, I actually think you have talent as a writer. I hate the content but the writing itself is good. Your story flows well and is easy to read regardless of whether I like cuckold stories or not. Relax little lifes to short.
Y'know, the premise of the story is workable
But there were simply too many incongruence's to make it work. The way this is written there shouldn't even have been a visit, let alone a bone-stupid wife gullible enough to fall for his ploy.
He couldn't get it up again because he had cum 3 days in a row? Really. I'm well over 40 and I can get it up twice in a row after doing it three days in a row. Now finding a partner to do that with is a different story, hehehe.
It would be hot if Kathy got pregnant by Frank
Poor old Billie would know it wasn't his baby, but kept it to himself. The next summer they visited Frank with their three month old baby, and Kathy came home pregnant again.
What a slut after his comments and her putting billy down !
He should have thrown them both put the door.
Absolutely NO intelligent thought put into the plot.
If you're a lay author, then why would any readers care to read your postings?
well you would know about blow up dolls dear annony
your mother was one, I gave the story a 5
bitch dog??? Now now annnony your mother was a botch dog
and she had you. gave it a 5
WTF
That pissed me off his cheating as wife and fake ass friend this story was terrible how Cheating is nothing to make light of
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