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Valley of the Woods Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/20/13

A solid start

I look forward to how this goes and wish you the best with your writing.

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by Anonymous12/21/13

If you're going to include non human or scifi stuff in your story, warn the reader before the story. Having said that keep going and good luck.

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by nastolgiclikeyou12/23/13

good start

It was an interesting start, I was confused most of the story and there were a few errors. Either write more or get a beta reader to point out the gaps.
Keep on writing.

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