In Searching the Heavens

first two lines

present a curious inversion, however it is followed through here as in
refuting its vision and the question and the answer
on counted grains of sand. - nice avoidance of cliche
5ed

Liked the first sentence; didn't feel the same about "counted grains of sand" until I realized it was an allusion. The ending was great.

Before reading this

I looked at your submission page, so in fact, this comment is more about the poet than the poem. (disclaimer) Some good titles there and here. I'm a sucker for the spiritual, and except for the gentle nudge(oy) I would not have seen it.
It read like a mini essay of the human condition as applies to the poet, however some editing to concentrate the essence would be good.in part as follows.
..
in (senseless) (schizophrenic) questions ,
than (in answers provided)
by (mountain climbing mystics.)
Nice work